Rules talk:Sororas Draconis

I'm not sure that the disadvantages necessarily balance out against Excellent bias just yet. Also, "1.5x less PL than starting" is kind of awkwardly written. I'd personally just say that they start with two-thirds the normal starting PL or something. Tiryst 05:06, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

*rewords the PL penalty* As for the template being balanced, there are a few things I want to tweek a bit, though none of them will overhaul it in a major way. These include a specific 'chart' for elemental weakness as they apply specifically to this minor race, and a little blurb to make playing them a bit more restrictive in some ways. For example, if I see someone make a character using this template and then the only RP I see from the character is adventures in mainland D'hennex that have nothing to do with hunting dragons, I will be quick to pull they 'you're a gay' card and take the necessary steps to correct the discrepancy.

I personally consider starting with 1,000 PL to be a fair trade-off for Excellent bias when the other weaknesses are factored in, mainly because character builds are defined by their first couple of techniques. A PL of only 1,000, even with Excellent bias, will not allow for characters to load tons of techniques into a build and then still start competitive. It will require using a select few to begin with a PL of even over 500. Consider Al's AIs; EMP damage, lack of epiphany, and a reduced gain percentage were all that offset an excellent bias. EMP sensitivity is (and was, in at least two AIs played in the room) easily countered with excellent bias, the lack of an epiphany is negligible, and I have an AI with 4% gains that still started with about 800 PL because the enhanced gain CT was not barred to the race or saddled with a bias increase. That said, a few other ideas I have are...

Write in that racial weaknesses in the form of increased damage are not circumventable via techniques.

Formulate a way to direct that techniques be written with a specific end that conforms to the central theme of dragon-slaying (I'm not to excited about this one given how quickly it can become complicated, but the idea is there).

Restrict the use of this race to only people that I like, which make up roughly 2.2% of the room's players, thereby reducing the potential for abuse by limiting the number in play.

If you have any other suggestions, I'm open to hearing them too. --Snackycakes 07:04, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

I'm glad that an elemental description of some sort will be worked out. I saw the comment about alignment to elements and just kind of went "what?" though I figured you were still adding stuff. I'd also like to note that the AI minor race is stupid. :)

I would certainly like to see a flat-out inability to negate their increased-damage weakness, though it is sad that it needs to be written out explicitly (much as i hate how EMP sensitivity is allowed to be overcome through techniques). Honestly though the race doesn't seem TOO unbalanced at the moment. I'll wait to see what else you do with the elements and such and comment again later. Tiryst 07:24, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

Alright fellas, few more changes. In order to strike a balance between player freedom and enforcing a centralized theme, I've provided a list of classical elements to choose from, along with corresponding weaknesses. As well, I've written in that elemental weaknesses and dragon's blood weaknesses cannot be circumvented via the use of techs. Hopefully these changes will make the race strike you as more balanced, but I'm still open to additional tweeking if you guys feel it's necesssary. --Snackycakes 09:36, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

The non-negatable weakness thing seems pretty good to me. I still want to say it's unbalanced (Excellent bias lol) but I think I'm willing to give this the thumbs up if nobody else has any particularly astute observations. Tiryst 18:26, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

The problem with balancing Excellent bias with reduced PL, as opposed to reduced gain, is that while Excellent bias is a continual boost that will benefit the character over its entire life, a reduction in starting PL simply delays the development for a short while, and is not a significant penalty in the long-term. A reduction in gain rate, in contrast, is a reduction in ability to develop the character over the long term. Even factoring Enhanced Gain in, the gain rate is still less than a character with an uninhibited base gain rate would achieve, as even the benefit that Enhanced Gain (as it is a multiplier rather than a flat addition to gain rate) is reduced.

To sum up, yes, reducing the initial PL is a good disadvantage. But I would also like to see a long-term disadvantage to match up with the Excellent bias' long-term advantage. Hroefn ^T 05:44, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

I'm not particularly interested in adding much else on the disadvantage side of things, considering that their elemental weaknesses are actually likely to come into play, though it is granted that some opposing elements are more common than others. I consider a 1,000 starting PL to be a significant disadvantage. Also, I'd like to point out that applied to ogres, the dismal bias not only allowed for over twice the allotted starting power-level, but a whopping 5% gain rate. I don't see why the reverse isn't applicable to this minor race, considering that excellent bias is slightly less potent now that the price paid for techniques is 60% base, not 50% as it was before LOL JUST KIDDING. --Snackycakes 05:56, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

So maybe we can either do the Excellent/Dismal alteration, or perhaps the 1000 starting PL can be changed to a reduction in PL gain (or maybe a reduction in daily cap only, or something)? Tiryst 07:26, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

This race appears to lack sponsorship. It needs at least two recorded sponsors as described under Rules:Minor Races before it can be considered for approval. --Ice 05:40, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

My bad, I thought you had to put it up and THEN get sponsors. I've already got two people (Kim and Marcus) who say they'll vouch for the race. I'll get them to sign off on it the next time I see them. --Snackycakes 07:04, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

It's not an issue, just saying you gotta have em up there as sponsors before we can approve the thing. You can put it up beforehand all you want :) Just mentioned it because it looked like you were submitting the race for approval. --Ice 09:42, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

I am indeed one of the sponsors for this race. And since I took so long in replying to this discussion (lol real life and other stuff lol), most of the unbalancing aspects seem to have been ironed out rather well. I can say that this could be approvable. --Marcus