Difference between revisions of "Talk:Kallinstrate"
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However, there is nothing to say that a revolution or political uprising could not occur within Theron after its subjugation to put your suggested leader into power, or it could have happened even before the subjugation of Theron and your suggested leader simply retained his position and then eventually rebelled to try to regain independence. [[User:Tiryst|Tiryst]] 15:59, 26 August 2006 (CDT) | However, there is nothing to say that a revolution or political uprising could not occur within Theron after its subjugation to put your suggested leader into power, or it could have happened even before the subjugation of Theron and your suggested leader simply retained his position and then eventually rebelled to try to regain independence. [[User:Tiryst|Tiryst]] 15:59, 26 August 2006 (CDT) | ||
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| + | This looks pretty good -- for a history lesson. It's a good piece of background, but I don't think it's suitable just yet for a piece of living setting. It doesn't give any information about locations of play, for instance. It gives no names of cities, no suggestions of places that characters might visit. I'd like to see it expanded into a place with more potential for RP than this before it's approved. [[User:Alothin|Hroefn]] 21:04, 7 September 2006 (CDT) | ||
Revision as of 19:04, 7 September 2006
The biggest issue I have with this is that the High King did not appoint governors or other rulers of territories. An-Yneaith was formed when he subjugated the rulers of other territories and declared himself High King. Therefore, if Kallinstrate is a territory of the High King, it would have been added in almost as-is, and not created later on by appointment of a ruler. Colonies were not created -- inhabitants of any lands the High King conquered were simply subjugated as past tribal leaders were, and whoever was the leader of Theron would have remained "in charge".
However, there is nothing to say that a revolution or political uprising could not occur within Theron after its subjugation to put your suggested leader into power, or it could have happened even before the subjugation of Theron and your suggested leader simply retained his position and then eventually rebelled to try to regain independence. Tiryst 15:59, 26 August 2006 (CDT)
Review
This looks pretty good -- for a history lesson. It's a good piece of background, but I don't think it's suitable just yet for a piece of living setting. It doesn't give any information about locations of play, for instance. It gives no names of cities, no suggestions of places that characters might visit. I'd like to see it expanded into a place with more potential for RP than this before it's approved. Hroefn 21:04, 7 September 2006 (CDT)
